Rise At Collapse Point!

Just when the world thought i had collapsed...................... i will rise!


Just took one step in the beginning

He’s not anymore willing

He just would want to give up,

cut the crap,shut it up!

Mad as he seems,looks like dreams

At every point he screams

He doesn’t know what he means

All that he’s ever done is disappoint

but he knows he will rise at collapse point!

Few miles from his goal,

Does not want to turn up in a hole,

Drawing strength from his fears

And whenever in his eyes came tears!

Turns it all back,

wraps them and pack,

So what all he’s done is just disappoint

Back off morons,he will rise at collapse point!

So keep the coast clear, he’s coming

his own ballad which he is singing,

Just like a soldier who won’t break down at gun point

He knows that he will rise at collapse point!



  1. shreya · February 2, 2011

    You are a magician i believe!

  2. maya · January 27, 2011

    truly inspiring! lifts your spirit,good 1!

  3. ananya · January 26, 2011

    That was a superbly written poem i just witnessed,marvellous and inspires!good job!

  4. ishita · January 23, 2011

    a really nice and inspiring poem, great!

  5. yash · January 23, 2011

    Hey this is really great writing, one needs to push one’s limit to know what one is actually capable of, nice 1!

  6. Anushka · January 23, 2011

    one word this was really inspiring, and definitely one of the nicest poems i have witnessed anywhere!Many a times i falter to certain situations in my life that i do not know how to cope with it,the easier route seems for me to give up and cry,but the one which actually works is rising when you are at collapse point!

  7. rituhot · January 10, 2011

    this was certainly inspirational, and i guess by far the best poem you have written so far……….. loved it thoroughly…………….phenomenal style, creativity at its original best! 5 on 5! keep bringing smiles to us…..you are doing a great job!

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